- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Alex ShihTalk 07:09, 23 August 2013 (UTC)
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Thầy Temple edit
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- ... that the Thầy Temple (pictured) established by King Ly Nhan Tong in the 11th century and dedicated to Zen master Từ Đạo Hạnh is one of the oldest pagodas in Vietnam?
5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self nominated at 14:18, 7 August 2013 (UTC).
Hook length OK, assume good faith that it is supported by offline / Vietnamese source. Expansion fivefold. Article could do with a thorough copy-edit, the grammar is poor. Image OK, no disambiguation, Extrenal Links all live. Jezhotwells (talk) 09:42, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
- I see some attempts to rework the grammar have been made. Unfortunately they have just introduced more errors. See if you can get someone from the WP:Guild of Copyeditors to help. Jezhotwells (talk) 09:19, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
- I have made the request.--Nvvchar. 04:57, 17 August 2013 (UTC)
Everything looks good to go. Article and hook referenced to offline and foreign language sources. Expanded within proper timeframe and within policy. The article's grammar has been improved. It could be improved further (I was hesitant to change certain things for fear of changing their meaning) but is no longer a problem we should be concerned with here. I would suggest a shorter snappier hook, but that's only personal preference.- ALT1 ... that the 11th century Thầy Temple (pictured) is one of the oldest pagodas in Vietnam?
- --Rushton2010 (talk) 01:43, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
- The shortened ALT1 hook is fine. Thank you for c/e and review.--Nvvchar. 02:24, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
