Template:Did you know nominations/Tempskya

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 11:07, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

Tempskya edit

  • Comment: This is my first DYK nomination. I'm fairly sure that this one meets all of the criteria. Note that the article has technically existed since Jan. 16, but was moved to the article namespace on Jan. 24. Chris the Paleontologist (talkcontribs) 22:28, 25 January 2012 (UTC)

Created/expanded by Chris the Paleontologist (talk). Self nom at 22:28, 25 January 2012 (UTC)

  • Hook: Short enough, cited, but less than interesting. Is there a way to summarize the hypothesized growth pattern? That's interesting, in my opinion.
Article: New enough, long enough, referenced thoroughly to reliable sources. Paraphrasing checked with this source and looks okay.
Wondering if there is a hookier hook. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:11, 27 January 2012 (UTC)
  • I have changed the hook to reflect suggestions from your comments. It's a bit wordy, but well under 200 characters, so it should be fine. Thanks for the constructive feedback. Chris the Paleontologist (talkcontribs) 23:55, 27 January 2012 (UTC)