- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:11, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
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Tarabya of Pegu edit
- ... that Tarabya, the self-proclaimed king of Pegu, was executed on the order of King Wareru of Martaban, who was his father-in-law and son-in-law? Sources: on the execution, see (Harvey 1925: 110) and (Pan Hla 2005: 32); on the relationship between the two men, see (Pan Hla 2005: 30) and (Phayre 1873: 41).
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... King Tarabya of Pegu was beheaded on the order of King Wareru of Martaban despite Wareru's daughter having tied her tresses to his to stop the execution??Source: (Harvey 1925: 110), (Pan Hla 2005: 32)
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- Reviewed: Typhoon Betty
Created by Hybernator (talk). Self-nominated at 03:26, 15 July 2017 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. I was at first not convinced that the hook facts on their relationship were correct, but on further thoughts, I think they are. The article is neutral and "Earwig" did not bring up any issues. QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:22, 31 July 2017 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote this, but I would like to see the hook fact stated plainly in the article and cited: "He married the daughter of Wareru and his daughter married Wareru". Also, I think you have a much hookier fact in Tarabya's wife tying her tresses with his to thwart the executioner, but he succeeded in beheading him anyway. Yoninah (talk) 22:32, 3 August 2017 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: I've rewritten the sentence for better clarity, and added ALT1 here. See if ALT1 is a better hook. Thanks. Hybernator (talk) 16:00, 6 August 2017 (UTC)