- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 07:25, 4 November 2011 (UTC)
Tank Collins edit
... that Tank Collins was described as a "500-pound gorilla" in high school?
- Reviewed: Día de Suerte
Created/expanded by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 22:03, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
Could we find a better hook? It is one quote from one person, and somewhat negative blp commentary. --Soman (talk) 08:25, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
- ALT1: "... that Tank Collins' mother forced him to play basketball as a child and would often play him in games of one-on-one?" Jrcla2 (talk) 18:12, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
- All looks good. Perhaps I would go with:
- ALT2: ... that "Tank" Collins was forced by his mother to play basketball to get over the death of his father and went on to become the American South Conference Men's Basketball Player of the Year?
Sources check out, spot checks are fine, and the referencing is good. The hook (ALT1 or ALT2) is ready to go onto the Main Page. GTG. violet/riga [talk] 23:20, 3 November 2011 (UTC)
