Template:Did you know nominations/Society of Catholic Scientists
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Vaticidalprophet (talk) 17:23, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
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Society of Catholic Scientists
Albert the Great, patron of the Society of Catholic Scientists
- ... that the Gold Mass was created by the Society of Catholic Scientists?
- ALT1:... that the Society of Catholic Scientists promotes the practice of the Gold Mass, following the tradition of Red Masses for lawyers, White Masses for those in health care, and Blue Masses for law enforcement professionals? "First 'Gold Mass' for scientists to be held at MIT Nov. 15". Boston Pilot. Retrieved 2018-06-15.
Moved to mainspace by Mpwiesner (talk) and Evrik (talk). Nominated by Evrik (talk) at 19:00, 24 June 2021 (UTC).
Article draft published same day it was nominated. It's long enough and neutrally written. QPQ done. I think ALT1 is more captivating. But the article needs a few more inline citations before I feel comfortable approving it for DYK: mainly, for the first and second sentences of the "Background" section, and then for the last sentence in the first paragraph in that section. Add those in, and it'll be good to go. (I would suggest searching for that information in news sources, like the ones you've cited in other paragraphs/sections.)
- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cstickel(byu) (talk • contribs) 16:24, July 5, 2021 (UTC)
- @Cstickel(byu): I reorganized the page to address your concerns. --evrik (talk) 16:06, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Evrik: Great, thank you! Sorry I forgot to mention this before, but it looks like ALT1 is just a little over 200 characters. Proposing:
- ALT2:... that the Society of Catholic Scientists sponsors Gold Masses, following the tradition of Red Masses for lawyers, White Masses for those in health care, and Blue Masses for public safety professionals?
- How's that?— Preceding unsigned comment added by Cstickel(byu) (talk • contribs) 13:44, July 5, 2021 (UTC)
- ALT2a:... that the Society of Catholic Scientists sponsors Gold Masses, following the tradition of Red Masses for lawyers, White Masses for those in health care, and Blue Masses for those in public safety?
- Okay with me. I am proposing a modiciation so you can approve it. --evrik (talk) 16:42, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
Looks good! Approving ALT2a. Cstickel(byu) (talk) 13:04, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
