Template:Did you know nominations/Sheila Callender
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:01, 15 October 2017 (UTC)
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Sheila Callender edit
- ... that Sheila Callender helped to establish haematology as a distinct medical discipline?
- Reviewed: A. M. Aikin, Jr.
Created by 97198 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:05, 7 October 2017 (UTC).
Newly created article with 418 words of readable prose size. No plagiarism or POV issue detected. QPQ has been provided. Meets the one inline citation per para criterion. The hook fact uses all the four citations present in the article of which I could check three. They recognise Callender's work in establishing haematology. Are you sure that the "distinct medical discipline" part can be used here? I'm sorry if I appear to be nitpicky. --Skr15081997 (talk) 10:11, 9 October 2017 (UTC)
- @Skr15081997: That was how I interpreted it, but I understand that it's not the exact wording used in the sources. If you're concerned we could just reword the hook:
- ALT1: ... that Sheila Callender helped to establish the medical discipline of haematology? 97198 (talk) 00:33, 10 October 2017 (UTC)
This is a perfectly fine hook and is supported by citations present in the article. Good to Go. --Skr15081997 (talk) 09:39, 10 October 2017 (UTC)
