Template:Did you know nominations/Shanghai Jewish Refugees Museum
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:59, 7 December 2014 (UTC)
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Shanghai Jewish Refugees Museum edit
- ... that the Ohel Moshe Synagogue (pictured) is now a museum commemorating the Jewish refugees who lived in Shanghai during World War II?
- Reviewed: Nyaungyan Min
Created by Difference engine (talk), Zanhe (talk). Nominated by Zanhe (talk) at 07:15, 3 December 2014 (UTC).
New enough and long enough. Moved from user space. AGF on Chinese characters. AGF on ref 3 which is to Google books but not a visible page. Image is good and correctly licensed with caption. Hook is correctly formatted. I detected no close paraphrasing or copy violations. I made some small copyedits and took the liberty of splitting the history section into two for clarity. The paragraph dealing with the general area has a ref at the start and one at the end but nothing for the historical information in the middle. It needs better references there. It will then be good to go. Philafrenzy (talk) 23:56, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for your review, Philafrenzy. I've added a new source (The Atlantic) and rewritten the history section based on the multiple sources. Please check it out. -Zanhe (talk) 09:52, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
Thanks. I can't help observing that there is little in the article about what actually happens in the museum, the stated subject of the article, but that is not a DYK problem as such. It's good to go. Philafrenzy (talk) 11:43, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
