Template:Did you know nominations/SeaCity Museum

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 02:10, 27 August 2012 (UTC)

SeaCity Museum edit

SeaCity Museum

Created/expanded by Hahnchen (talk). Self nom at 14:09, 22 August 2012 (UTC)

I do think that the DYK would be more an overall account of the article if Titanic was mentioned. The article seems fine, otherwise. — M.Mario (T/C) 10:25, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
Please specify what's OK, and what needs to be fixed to get this nomination approved (article length, date of creating/expansion, date of nomination, within policy (neutral, have inline citation and is free of copyvio), if the hook-fact is backed up by a source, and if QPQ needs to be done). Mentoz86 (talk) 12:06, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
QPQ does not need to be done - the article is at the correct length. It has been expanded in the last seven days, and is the seems neutral. It sites sources throughout the article. So yes, as I said - it seems fine. But, a more interesting hook, actually no, a hook which represent the article more would be prefered. — M.Mario (T/C) 12:20, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. I thought the funding angle was the most interesting fact about the museum, I also thought that links to Alfred Munnings and Auguste Rodin would be more original than the RMS Titanic (which we've seen a lot of this year). I don't believe that hooks should be an "overall account" of the article, but merely to draw people in - here I suggest that the hook be shortened in order to give less away. I will admit though, that people are still mad about the Titanic, so you are free to suggest alternative hooks. - hahnchen 12:48, 24 August 2012 (UTC)