Template:Did you know nominations/Rob Mayes

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The result was: promoted by Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:59, 1 May 2014 (UTC)

Rob Mayes

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Created/expanded by Corvoe (talk). Self nominated at 01:34, 30 April 2014 (UTC).

Long enough. New enough. He appears notable. Everything looks good. However, I don't see the hook cited in the article. Please have the claim that he wanted to be a Navy Seal and well move forward with this. Ping me on my TP when ready. Étienne Dolet (talk) 19:52, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
@EtienneDolet: It is sourced by source 1, the USA Today source. Sentence is "He attended the United States Naval Academy, despite his acceptance into the United States Military Academy, and planned to become a Navy SEAL". Perhaps I should change "once wanted to be" to "originally planned to be"? Corvoe (speak to me) 22:19, 30 April 2014 (UTC)
Long enough. New enough. I think the original hook is fine. Sources appear to be reliable. I cited the sentence for the hook. We're good to go. Good work!!! Étienne Dolet (talk) 04:20, 1 May 2014 (UTC)