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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 23:21, 5 September 2013 (UTC)
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Ring of Terror edit
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that Ring of Terror is the only film that Lewis Simeon and Jerrold I. Zinnamon wrote?... that Ring of Terror was criticized as a "cheaply made flop" with actors decades older playing young college students?
5x expanded by Taylor Trescott (talk). Self nominated at 23:09, 27 August 2013 (UTC).
The "plot summary" section is a copyright violation committed by an earlier user. It will have to be addressed before we front-page this article though. Also, the hook is very dull. Perhaps "... that Ring of Terror was criticized as a "cheaply made flop" with actors decades older playing young college students? Gamaliel (talk) 23:46, 4 September 2013 (UTC)
- The alternate hook you gave is good. I have also taken care of the plot summary section. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 00:07, 5 September 2013 (UTC)
