Template:Did you know nominations/Rúben Fernandes

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:25, 17 April 2016 (UTC)

Rúben Fernandes edit

Fernandes playing for Estoril
Fernandes playing for Estoril

5x expanded by Royroydeb (talk). Self-nominated at 15:54, 1 April 2016 (UTC).

  • checkY New enough (nominated on day of expansion, 1 April), long enough (more than 5x expansion, and 1623 character excluding infobox & table), and within policy.
  • checkY Hook is short enough, interesting, and supported by inline citations.
  • checkY QPQ done.
  • checkY Image is freely licenced, is in the article and looks good enough quality.
  • Overall, passes, congratulations. Joseph2302 (talk) 20:44, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
  • I came to promote the nomination, but find the approved hook wordy, confusing, and uninteresting. A better hook is needed. -Zanhe (talk) 17:31, 13 April 2016 (UTC)

Is it OK? Joseph2302 Zanhe RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 09:12, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

  • Sorry, but still no. There's nothing unusual about a footballer being signed to replace a departing one. How about this:
  • ALT2 ... that despite indicating willingness to renew his contract with a Portuguese club, Portuguese footballer Rúben Fernandes instead signed with a newly promoted Belgian one? -Zanhe (talk) 16:46, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
Zanhe Ok I accept this hook. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 18:25, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
I'm not allowed to review my own hook, so pinging Joseph2302, the original reviewer. -Zanhe (talk) 18:27, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
Fine by me. Zanhe Are you now okay to promote this nomination with ALT2 hook? Joseph2302 (talk) 19:43, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
I added a tick per your comment. Need another volunteer to promote the hook, as I'm now involved. -Zanhe (talk) 05:22, 15 April 2016 (UTC)