- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 15:37, 9 January 2016 (UTC)
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Prionomyrmecini edit
... that members of the ant tribe of Prionomyrmecini can be distinguished from other members by the reduced or lacking ocelli, and a lateral clypeal carina is present?
- Reviewed: Wildlife of the United Arab Emirates (4th of four)
Improved to Good Article status by Burklemore1 (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 21:43, 12 December 2015 (UTC).
This is a newly-promoted good article and is long enough and nominated in time. The article is well-referenced and neutral, and I detected no copyright issues. The hook is uninteresting because it uses so many technical terms with which most readers will be unfamiliar. If I am correct in thinking that Prionomyrmex is extinct and Nothomyrmecia macrops is critically endangered, that might be the basis for a hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:58, 29 December 2015 (UTC)
- I agree with Cwmhiraeth's comments and I would recommend to change the hook to her suggestion. Burklemore1 (talk) 03:04, 2 January 2016 (UTC)
- @Burklemore1: If I suggest a hook, we will have to wait for someone else to review it. So it would be better if you suggested an ALT1 hook, and then I will be able to review it and hopefully approve this nomination. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:04, 2 January 2016 (UTC)
- I agree with Cwmhiraeth's comments and I would recommend to change the hook to her suggestion. Burklemore1 (talk) 03:04, 2 January 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review. I may spell out alt hooks along with your suggestion, but need help with adding extra citations. Oceanh (talk) 23:19, 8 January 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the ant tribe of Prionomyrmecini has two members, of which one genus is extinct and the other is critically endangered?
- ALT2: ... that the ant tribe Prionomyrmecini has two members, the genus Prionomyrmex being extinct and Nothomyrmecia being critically endangered?
Approving ALT2 as being more satisfactory than ALT1 and striking the original hook. I have added a reference for these hooks. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:06, 9 January 2016 (UTC)
