Template:Did you know nominations/Philip Slier

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 03:10, 6 December 2012 (UTC)

Philip Slier

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Created/expanded by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nom at 12:50, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

 Date, length, and refs check out yet there are some questions: Why so many headers/subsections in a relatively short article? Seems unnecessary, actually distracting and disruptive, to have camps and yellow star being redirected to a main article. Why do it if they are linked inside continuous prose about Slier's biography?  Also, while it's interesting to include the comparison to Anne Frank in the hook, somehow the phrasing/word choice seems awkward. Unfortunately can't seem to come up with an ALT at this time. Any suggestions? Djflem (talk) 23:23, 4 December 2012 (UTC)
Djflem - thanks for the improvement to the article of removing the sub-headers. Looks much better.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:24, 5 December 2012 (UTC)
Looks good to go. Added an ALT 3. Djflem (talk) 16:16, 5 December 2012 (UTC)