Template:Did you know nominations/Petroleum Warfare Department
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:48, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
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Petroleum Warfare Department edit
- ... that in WWII Britain's Petroleum Warfare Department threatened to set the sea on fire?
5x expanded by Gaius Cornelius (talk). Nominated by Gaius Cornelius (talk) at 12:54, 7 June 2013 (UTC).
- Note: this article was moved from user space to the main space today. It replaced a short stub article which is conserved here: Petroleum Warfare Department (old). Gaius Cornelius (talk) 12:59, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
Length, history and reference verified. But ... could we do something about prose like "the rumours spread as surely as oil spreads on water"? It doesn't appear to be attributed to a source, so it's either copied or it's not encyclopedic if it's original to us. Daniel Case (talk) 04:34, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for looking; its a long article and takes time to review. The words to which you refer are mine. I think the prose is pretty dry and I didn't see anything wrong with a fairly common idiom that happened to appropriate. Still, as it is getting in the way I will remove it. If there is anything else you feel should go, please feel free to remove it. Happy editing Gaius Cornelius (talk) 10:07, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
OK, saw you did that. Good to go now. Daniel Case (talk) 06:11, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
