- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:33, 19 August 2017 (UTC)
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Pelé
edit- ... that Pelé scored a record 92 hat-tricks as a football player? (Brazil legend Pele retires from professional football)
- ALT1: ... that Pelé scored 1283 goals over the course of 1363 games as a football player, a world record? (Pelé honoured with two Guinness World Records achievements in London)
Improved to Good Article status by JerrySa1 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:32, 2 August 2017 (UTC).
- Became a good article recently, definitely long enough (it's a really compelling read!), is neutral, cites sources, no copyvio. I fixed the formatting in the hooks, it's interesting, definitely cited, and neutral. (Should it be mentioned that he plays association football? Or has he "transcended" that?) However, a
QPQ needs to be done. (see backlog)--Hameltion (talk, contribs) 14:10, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
- Hameltion, while it would be nice if JerrySa1 reviewed another DYK nomination, new contributors to DYK have an exemption to the Quid Pro Quo requirement until they have amassed five DYK credits. I can't see that JerrySa1 has any previous credits, or indeed has previously edited any other DYK nomination templates, so it would seem that he does not have to do a QPQ. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:10, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
- Became a good article recently, definitely long enough (it's a really compelling read!), is neutral, cites sources, no copyvio. I fixed the formatting in the hooks, it's interesting, definitely cited, and neutral. (Should it be mentioned that he plays association football? Or has he "transcended" that?) However, a
- (edit conflict) Also, per WP:DYKSG#C2:
Don't assume everyone worldwide knows what country or sport you're talking about.
So I think your instinct is right about specifying the sport in the hooks. These should be adjusted prior to promotion. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:15, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
- Done Jerry (talk) 20:05, 18 August 2017 (UTC)
- JerrySa1, I hope you don't mind, but I modified "footballer" to "football player", and linked "football" to "association football" for clarity. (Interestingly enough, "footballer" just redirects to the "football player" article.) BlueMoonset (talk) 00:50, 19 August 2017 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) Also, per WP:DYKSG#C2: