Template:Did you know nominations/Patrick Francheterre

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:43, 9 July 2019 (UTC)

Patrick Francheterre edit

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... that Patrick Francheterre played, coached and managed for the France men's national ice hockey team, and used his own money to pay some expenses when the French Ice Hockey Federation was in bankruptcy? hockey career (in english)hockey career (in english)bankruptcy (in french)

Reviewed: Electric Telegraph Company

5x expanded by Flibirigit (talk). Self-nominated at 14:13, 31 May 2019 (UTC).

This is eligible as a 5x expansion. I like the hook and am accepting the foreign-language source as AGF because the English link no longer works. I wonder about focusing on the bakruptcy and the fact that he was never reimbursed. Might that be more interesting, Flibirigit? Once the link is fixed in the article, this will be good to go. StudiesWorld (talk) 17:59, 24 June 2019 (UTC)

I have updated the first citation with a web.archive.org link, and added a second bilingual source to summarize his career. The bankruptcy information is only in French. I added the word "some" before expenses in the hook to be more accurate. I considered your suggestion, but not stating "never reimbursed" is not completely accurate since he did recuperate some costs, and I am not sure if saying partially reimbursed is very hooky. Flibirigit (talk) 20:14, 24 June 2019 (UTC)

Flibirigit, . This looks good and covers the bases. Some of the sources are not great, but they seem good enough. I'm approving the hook. StudiesWorld (talk) 14:03, 27 June 2019 (UTC)