Template:Did you know nominations/Number 12 exposé
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:41, 23 June 2018 (UTC)
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Number 12 exposé edit
- ... that the Number 12 investigative documentary by award winning journalist, Anas Anas (pictured), shed light on football corruption in Ghana? Source: [1]
- ALT1:... that in the Number 12 exposé by award winning journalist, Anas Anas (pictured), over 70 football referees were caught taking bribes? Source: [2] and [3])
- ALT2:... that in the Number 12 exposé by award winning journalist, Anas Anas (pictured), only 3 out of over 80 football personalities refused to be bribed? [4]
Created by Crosstemplejay (talk). Self-nominated at 15:28, 12 June 2018 (UTC).
Doing...Pratyush (talk) 12:17, 19 June 2018 (UTC)- The article was created on 6th June and not on 12th June under which it is listed at Template talk:Did you know, but since the article was nominated within seven days of its creation (created:6th June, nominated:12th June), assuming good faith I will continue with the review. Pratyush (talk) 17:46, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Crosstemplejay:. Tiger Eye P.I can be linked in the lead itself. Kumasi, Tamale and Takoradi should also be linked in the last line of the article. [5] (currently Reference 19 in the article) does not have any use in the article in my opinion and should be removed. 'Premiering' should be replaced 'premier' in the last section, including the section title. Also in the last section, "Former Presidents John Agyekum Kufuor and John Dramani Mahama were allowed to see the investigative piece a day before the official premiering. And both men expressed" should be replaced with "Former Presidents John Agyekum Kufuor and John Dramani Mahama viewed the investigative piece and expressed" to better reflect the sources. This source (currently in article as ref 17) mentions the official name of the documentary to be "When Greed and Corruption Become the Norm" which should be mentioned in the article. Rest of the review to follow after improvements in the article. Please ping when replying. Pratyush (talk) 18:37, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Pratyush: Thanks for the review. All your above concerns have been addressed. Please go through again. Thanks.CrossTempleJay 10:02, 20 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Crosstemplejay: You might have pinged the wrong person. My username is "PratyushSinha101". Sorry for the confusing signature which might have caused this mistake, I would change it shortly.
- I think wrong reference may have been removed. I believe this citation should be removed from the article as it does not serve any purpose. I requested the change in sentence "Former Presidents John Agyekum Kufuor and John Dramani Mahama were allowed to see the investigative piece a day before the official premiering. And both men expressed" because it suggests they were blocked from seeing it beforehand, which does not seem the case by looking at the references. Please fix it. I hope I am able to express myself clearly, feel free to ask if it is not the case.
- If the above concerns are addressed. The article was within the 7 days timeframe at the time of nomination. Article is long enough. Article is reasonably neutral, cites sources with inline citation and no major copyvio issues noticed by Earwig's copyvio detecter. ALT1 seems more interesting to me but the source mentions it as 'Aremeyaw Anas is "alleged" to have'. Any chance for a better source? Otherwise 1st hook is good to go. Pratyush (talk) 15:17, 20 June 2018 (UTC)
- @PratyushSinha101: Thanks for another review. Gone through your comments and made the necessary changes. Please go through the dyk again. God bless.CrossTempleJay 11:11, 21 June 2018 (UTC)
