- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:22, 3 August 2016 (UTC)
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NHL 17 edit
... that NHL 17 features a playable version of the 2016 World Cup of Hockey tournament?
- ALT1:... that in NHL 17, players can become the general manager of an NHL team and potentially relocate them to another city?
- Reviewed: The Face (EP)
5x expanded by Aria1561 (talk). Self-nominated at 17:21, 24 July 2016 (UTC).
No issues found with article, ready for human review.
- ✓ This article has been expanded from 404 chars to 6303 chars since 19:42, 15 July 2016 (UTC), a 15.60-fold expansion
- ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 6303 characters
- ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
- ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
- ✓ A copyright violation is unlikely (1.0% confidence; confirm)
- Note to reviewers: There is low confidence in this automated metric, please manually verify that there is no copyright infringement or close paraphrasing. Note that this number may be inflated due to cited quotes and titles which do not constitute a copyright violation.
Some overall issues detected
- ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 79 characters
- ✓ The hook ALT1 is an appropriate length at 111 characters
- ✗ Aria1561 has more than 5 DYK credits. A QPQ review is required for this nomination.
Automatically reviewed by DYKReviewBot. This bot is experimental; please report any issues. This is not a substitute for a human review. --DYKReviewBot (report bugs) 23:04, 24 July 2016 (UTC)
- Reviewed DYKN for The Face (EP). Aria1561 (talk) 14:26, 25 July 2016 (UTC)
- - The article does not explicitly mention that 2016 World Cup of Hockey is playable, or that you can be a general manager of "any NHL team". The hook is not very interesting, but I think it is acceptable. The experimental bot is right about everything. I am quite impressed with the article and I hope that we would see more decent sports game articles in the future. AdrianGamer (talk) 15:46, 31 July 2016 (UTC)
- @AdrianGamer: I've reworded the article's prose to better fit each hook. Aria1561 (talk) 13:34, 1 August 2016 (UTC)
- The first hook isn't sourced, but the second one is. AdrianGamer (talk) 04:37, 2 August 2016 (UTC)
- @AdrianGamer: I've reworded the article's prose to better fit each hook. Aria1561 (talk) 13:34, 1 August 2016 (UTC)
