Template:Did you know nominations/Murder of Jacqueline Thomas

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 18:05, 25 February 2012 (UTC)

Murder of Jacqueline Thomas edit

Created/expanded by Paul MacDermott (talk). Self nom at 10:29, 22 February 2012 (UTC)

New enough, long enough, hook cited, etc.--Ishtar456 (talk) 22:06, 22 February 2012 (UTC)
Some of the phrasings used in this article may be too close to those used by these two source. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:40, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
 Done Paul MacDermott (talk) 13:40, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

  • Paraphrasing appears to be adequate.--Ishtar456 (talk) 02:49, 25 February 2012 (UTC)
    • Just a quick comment here. It would be very helpful if this happens again if people could direct me to the actual problem sentences as it would speed things up a little for me. I use a screen magnifier to edit so I don't see the whole screen and can't therefore quickly scan through and compare both sets of text. Cheers Paul MacDermott (talk) 10:38, 25 February 2012 (UTC)