The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 08:00, 4 November 2011 (UTC)

Moonax edit

  • Comment: This is the first time I have nominated. I have tried to follow the instructions.

Created/expanded by Tigerboy1966 (talk). Self nom at 11:46, 26 October 2011 (UTC)

  • You are supposed to have one ref per para as a minimum, a problem you could largely solve by combining over-short paras (they should not usually be just a single sentence long). Rest looked ok but I didn't get far. Johnbod (talk) 00:54, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
    • Done (I thought it was an average of one ref per para, but fixed now anyway). Tigerboy1966 (talk) 01:30, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
  • all ok Johnbod (talk) 02:17, 27 October 2011 (UTC)