Template:Did you know nominations/Mexican ironwood carvings
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The result was: promoted by Carabinieri (talk) 12:57, 29 March 2012 (UTC)
Mexican ironwood carvings edit
- ... that Mexican ironwood carvings (example pictured) are believed to be a danger to the conversion of deserts into fertile land?
- ALT1 ... that the Mexican ironwood carving industry (example pictured) brings in about a million dollars a year?
- ALT2 ... that Mexican ironwood carvings (example pictured) didn't become popular in other countries until University of Arizona students began buying them in the late 1960s?
- Reviewed: Grown-Up (EP)
Created/expanded by Thelmadatter (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 17:30, 17 March 2012 (UTC)
very nice topic, and good article. I took the liberty of some edits, including breaking some large paragraphs up. I don't care for the first hook because it says the trees are endangering the conversion while the article says that the conversion is endangering the trees. I think there needs to be some agreement in the way it is worded. Also the citations are not in numerical order. 2 comes before 1 in serveral places.--Ishtar456 (talk) 22:45, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
- I changed the citation order. I vote for ALT2 (partly because Im a U of A alum)Thelmadatter (talk) 01:35, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
- There needs to be a citation immediately following the hook fact in the article.--Ishtar456 (talk) 06:49, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
- Done--Thelmadatter (talk) 16:11, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
