Template:Did you know nominations/Mary Isabella Hales Horne
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:58, 28 October 2016 (UTC)
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Mary Isabella Hales Horne
edit... that in 1876, Mary Isabella Hales Horne was elected as vice-president of the Utah Silk Association, which was organized by Brigham Young and headed by other prominent LDS church leaders including Zina D. H. Young, General Relief Society president?- ALT1:... that Mary Isabella Hales Horne was the mother of 15 children, including three sets of twins?
- Reviewed: This is my first nomination.
Created by Phelps (BYU) (talk). Self-nominated at 20:30, 20 October 2016 (UTC).
- The article is new enough, long enough and within policy regarding neutrality. The first hook is too long - exceeds 200 characters. I think it's too wordy. I verified the election as VP of Utah Silk Association with source. ALT1 is fine and probably more interesting, could not verify with source but there is no reason to doubt it. Image is from commons and stated as out-of-copywrite due to age. This is my first DYK review, so I certainly think a check by another editor is needed. MB 20:00, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
Second review: New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I have struck ALT0 in favor of ALT1, which is much hookier. I found the hook fact in one of the online sources being used and added it to the sentence. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. No QPQ needed for first-time nominator. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 23:06, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
