- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 14:11, 2 June 2021 (UTC)
| DYK toolbox |
|---|
Maria Calegari
... that after ballerina Maria Calegari left the New York City Ballet, she began staging works choreographed by George Balanchine and Jerome Robbins?- ALT1:
... that early in her career, ballerina Maria Calegari filled in for two injured principal dancer during New York City Ballet's Tchaikovsky Festival?
- ALT1:
- Reviewed: Rebecca Dayan
- Comment: Offline sources
Created by Corachow (talk). Self-nominated at 10:50, 17 May 2021 (UTC).
Nice article - I enjoyed reading it. The article is long enough, new enough, netural and well sourced. QPQ is done. Hook one is cited correctly. I checked the sources, and they are correct. Of the two hooks given, I prefer the first hook. The second hook should actually have the citation moved up to the sentence that has the fact. Personally, I think a more fun fact for hook 2 is that she once danced a principal role in every ballet performed at the last weekend of the festival. But original proposed hook is fine as is. Good to go. PMCH2 (talk) 02:48, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
- @PMCH2: Thanks for the review. Per your suggestion, I'm adding another hook.
- ALT2:... that Maria Calegari danced every principal role in every ballet performed by the New York City Ballet during a weekend in her early career?
- I prefer ALT2 over ALT0 and ALT1. Corachow (talk) 09:21, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
