- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 16:04, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
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María Ruanova edit
- ... that María Ruanova was the first Argentine international ballet dancer who learnt to dance in Argentina?
Created by EagerToddler39 (talk). Self nominated at 08:20, 2 March 2014 (UTC).
Looks great - cannot see any issues but the hook fact doesnt appear to be in the article. The closest I could find was "She is considered the first Argentina-grown ballet dancer to gain international fame" .... which is only in the lede and is not quite what the hook claims. Happy to approve a hook based on this or maybe something like the "highest dance award in Argentina is names after ..." thanks Victuallers (talk) 09:51, 2 March 2014 (UTC)
- The statement you quoted from the article is precisely the one to which I attempted to refer with the hook. Seems my paraphrase was not accurate. I've attempted to reconcile that in the article by repeating this info (reworded) at the beginning of the "Recognition" section. Let me know if the paraphrase sounds a lot better and if the hook is evident from this. If not I'll propose an ALT about the dance award. EagerToddler39 (talk) 16:16, 2 March 2014 (UTC)
- The new wording works for me. Thanks Victuallers (talk) 20:47, 2 March 2014 (UTC)
