Template:Did you know nominations/Kedok Ketawa

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 18:27, 12 February 2013 (UTC)

Kedok Ketawa edit

  • ... that after writing a positive review for Kedok Ketawa, Saeroen wrote two films for its production company?

Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 08:14, 5 February 2013 (UTC)

  • Though I would consider adding "the film" before "Kedok". And changing it "wrote two films for" to "joined".--Epeefleche (talk) 21:30, 6 February 2013 (UTC)