Template:Did you know nominations/John Butler (general)

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The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:25, 30 January 2013 (UTC)

John Butler (general) edit

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... that at the Battle of Lindley's Mill, militia general John Butler attempted in vain to rescue North Carolina Governor Thomas Burke, who had been captured by Loyalist militia leader David Fanning?

Reviewed: Charles Hercules Read

Created by Cdtew (talk). Self nom at 19:21, 24 January 2013 (UTC)

This is pretty good. Date and length are fine. Article is well-referenced and the sources are of good quality. It's well written (just one thing, there's no need to put a comma after a month - e.g. "May, 1772" - I've made some edits to remove examples of this). The hook is appropriately sourced and interesting enough. Overall, we're good to go. Prioryman (talk) 20:17, 24 January 2013 (UTC)