Template:Did you know nominations/Jambo OpenOffice

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:35, 15 January 2012 (UTC)

Jambo OpenOffice edit

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... that Jambo OpenOffice was the first office suite in Swahili?

Comment: possible add at the en of the sentence: ", spoken by over 100 mil people."

Created/expanded by Mabdul (talk). Self nom at 02:25, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

The article was expanded fivefold starting on December 30th rather than January 2nd but no matter, it is within time. Otherwise, it is long enough and the sourcing and hook seem satisfactory. I can't tell whether the author needed to review another article but I think he/she has fewer than 5 DYKs. I have copyedited the article slightly and suggest the following alternative hook: Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:12, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
ALT1 ... that Jambo OpenOffice was the first office suite in Swahili, a language spoken by about a hundred million people?

Comment: yeah sorry, The DYK system changed dramatical since my last ones and somehow I found the old one better. XD ALT1 is much more better than my proposal. And yes correct: I didn't reviewed another article since I'm busy in the Move to commons drive, but next month I will do some. ;) mabdul 11:52, 13 January 2012 (UTC)