- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:34, 10 July 2016 (UTC)
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Henry S. Kesler edit
- ... that film producer and director Henry S. Kesler was the grandson of LDS prophet Joseph F. Smith?
- ALT1:... that film producer and director Henry S. Kesler worked with Cecil DeMille, William Wyler, and Billy Wilder?
- Reviewed: List of Padma Bhushan award recipients (1990–99)
Created by Amgisseman(BYU) (talk). Self-nominated at 21:05, 24 June 2016 (UTC).
Doing... Josh Milburn (talk) 08:55, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
I'm a little concerned about close paraphrasing; your wording seems to quite closely match the wording of your source (at least in the early life section, which is the piece I checked). The article is new enough and long enough, and the hooks (especially the first) are good. But could you perhaps try to tweak the wording to avoid paraphrasing? Josh Milburn (talk) 09:22, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
- Josh Milburn I changed some of the wording, but I ran the article through Earwigs Copyvio Detector and it came back at only 2%. I did change some of the wording, but could you be more specific in what wording exactly you think should be changed? There are two different sources in that section, so I just want to make sure I am addressing the problem. Amgisseman(BYU) (talk) 19:35, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry about the delay. If I haven't gotten to this in a couple of days please leave an angry comment on my talk page. Josh Milburn (talk) 18:15, 3 July 2016 (UTC)
Some more spot-checking revealed no problems, so I'm happy to go. Maybe I was a little harsh. The copyvio checker will not necessarily catch close paraphrasing, just direct copying; there can be problems with text even if it's not word-for-word. Just something to be aware of, I suppose. Josh Milburn (talk) 19:50, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
