- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 04:54, 30 June 2016 (UTC)
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Hamza Ali edit
... that Hamza Ali played first-class cricket for Hampshire County Cricket Club and List A cricket for Rawalpindi Rams?
- ALT1:
... that Hamza Ali played in one first-class cricket match in his career? - Reviewed: London 1 South
- Comment: As Hamza Ali recently died, I think this hook should be left for a few weeks.
- ALT1:
5x expanded by Joseph2302 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:28, 14 June 2016 (UTC).
This article is a five-fold expansion and is new enough and long enough. Approving ALT0 which has inline citations for its facts. The article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:12, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
The ALT0 hook is rather bland. It would help to mention that he died so young:- ALT2: ... that Hamza Ali, who played first-class cricket for Hampshire County Cricket Club and List A cricket for Rawalpindi Rams, died at age 20? Yoninah (talk) 07:28, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
- ALT2 is fine with me. There's not going to be a super-interesting hook about his life, and ALT2 is more interesting. Joseph2302 (talk) 09:21, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
Thank you. Since I added an additional hook fact, could another reviewer sign off on this please? @Cwmhiraeth:? Yoninah (talk) 17:55, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
- ALT2A: ... that Hamza Ali died at age 20, having already played first-class cricket for Hampshire County Cricket Club and List A cricket for Rawalpindi Rams?
- I also thought the hook could be made more interesting but there is a temptation to pass the nomination rather than start suggesting new hooks. ALT2 fulfils DYK criteria, and I have also amended it to ALT2A. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:06, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
