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The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 08:23, 7 July 2021 (UTC)
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Haley Cavinder
Haley Cavinder
- ... that college basketball players Haley Cavinder (pictured) and her twin sister, Hanna, are among the first NCAA athletes to sign endorsement deals? Source: "The twins are among the first college athletes to announce endorsement deals under new NCAA rules." (ESPN)
- ALT1:... that basketball players Haley Cavinder (pictured) and her twin sister, Hanna, are among the first college athletes to sign endorsement deals? Source: "The twins are among the first college athletes to announce endorsement deals under new NCAA rules." (ESPN)
- ALT2... that college basketball player Haley Cavinder (pictured) and her twin sister, Hanna, signed a major endorsement deal within minutes of it being allowed? Source=>"Hanna and Haley Cavinder waited for only a few minutes after the clock struck midnight before taking advantage"
Created by Sportzeditz (talk). Self-nominated at 15:15, 2 July 2021 (UTC).
- No QPQ, but article is good for length and has enough refs. No sign of close paraphrasing and sources look good. I think the hook is OK but could be hookier. "Amongst the first" makes it sound as if they signed after a few weeks and no one else got an offer. I'm not sure about ALT1 as I suspect that college baseball and football players already do endorsements but Im only guessing. I will suggest an ALT2 which someone might like to tick as I think it more hooky. Victuallers (talk) 20:07, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Victuallers: I would be OK with ALT2. QPQ is not required (fewer than 5 DYK credits). Sportzeditz (talk) 21:40, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
Good to go with main hook of alt2. Thanks Victuallers (talk) 08:00, 4 July 2021 (UTC)