Template:Did you know nominations/Gustave A. Mueller

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:39, 7 July 2019 (UTC)

Gustave A. Mueller

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  • ... that Gustave A. Mueller was "a high authority in homeopathic medicine"? "Dr. G. A. Muller". The Pittsburgh Press. February 10, 1912. p. 7. Retrieved May 29, 2019 – via Newspapers.com.
    • ALT1:... that Gustave A. Mueller was "active in secret orders, being a member of the Crescent lodge of the Masons and several other societies."? "Dr. G. A. Muller". The Pittsburgh Press. February 10, 1912. p. 7. Retrieved May 29, 2019 – via Newspapers.com.
    • ALT2:... that surgeon Gustave A. Mueller was "one of the leading specialists" in the treatment of the eye, the ear, the nose and the throat? "Dr. G. A. Muller". The Pittsburgh Press. February 10, 1912. p. 7. Retrieved May 29, 2019 – via Newspapers.com.

Created by Zigzig20s (talk). Self-nominated at 04:37, 31 May 2019 (UTC).

  • new enough, long enough, hook is cited and inline citations. Continuing review.Skyes(BYU) (talk) 21:04, 5 June 2019 (UTC)
  • article appears to be neutral. QPQ done. Appears to be free of plagiarism. Skyes(BYU) (talk) 21:11, 5 June 2019 (UTC)
I think ALT2 is the best hook. It is clear, yet specific. Skyes(BYU) (talk) 21:23, 5 June 2019 (UTC)
  • @ZigZig20s: have you read WP:LIMITED? Is there really a reason for the quoted text in ALT2? Sometimes just changing one or two words and leaving the rest neatly sidesteps the problem of close paraphrasing. Yoninah (talk) 20:07, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
User:Yoninah:I always err on the side of caution, but I believe you have a point. Please feel free to remove the quotation marks.Zigzig20s (talk) 20:33, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
  • OK. Since ALT2 gives no context (location, era), do you want to add more to the hook, like:
  • ALT2a: ... that Gustave A. Mueller of the Homeopathic Hospital of Pittsburgh was considered a leading specialist in the treatment of the eye, the ear, the nose and the throat? Yoninah (talk) 20:41, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
Yes, that's fine. Do we need to change the article please?Zigzig20s (talk) 20:45, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
  • I just changed it in the lead. The paragraph in the body of the article has two quotes from the newspaper, so I left the quotes there. Restoring tick for ALT2a per Skyes(BYU)'s review. Yoninah (talk) 20:58, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
Thank you.Zigzig20s (talk) 21:07, 6 July 2019 (UTC)