Template:Did you know nominations/Ground Swell (painting)

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 12:31, 17 September 2020 (UTC)

Ground Swell (painting)

[[File:|140px|Ground Swell, a 1939 painting by Edward Hopper ]]
Ground Swell, a 1939 painting by Edward Hopper

Created by GeneralPoxter (talk). Self-nominated at 22:25, 1 September 2020 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: I'm assuming this is one of your first 5 DYKs as appears to be the case. (t · c) buidhe 03:28, 2 September 2020 (UTC)

Yes, this is my second nomination GeneralPoxter (talk) 22:08, 2 September 2020 (UTC)
  • Please expand the lead per WP:LEAD. I have also added a "citation needed" tag to one of the facts. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:38, 2 September 2020 (UTC)
I made edits and expansions according to your suggestions. GeneralPoxter (talk) 03:10, 3 September 2020 (UTC)
  • @GeneralPoxter: Thank you. More could also be added to the lead about the composition of the painting. The lead is meant to function as a mini-article, telling the reader all that will be discussed in greater detail in the body of the article. But it's okay as a start-class article. Restoring tick per Buidhe's review. Yoninah (talk) 20:13, 5 September 2020 (UTC)
For anyone concerned about the offline/paywall citation, I think I made a mistake in linking the source. It should be freely accessible now. GeneralPoxter (talk) 02:01, 14 September 2020 (UTC)