Template:Did you know nominations/Giovan Giacomo Paleari Fratino

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 05:03, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

Giovan Giacomo Paleari Fratino

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Torra di Mortella

Created/expanded by Aymatth2 (talk). Nominated by Prioryman (talk) at 22:45, 15 October 2012 (UTC)

  • New: Good. Length: More than 4000 chars. Policy: There seems to be some close paraphrasing of the Vigano sourse. Nominator needs to perform some editing to make the article more distinct from its sources. Abyssal (talk) 16:39, 18 October 2012 (UTC)
  • Looks good, I guess. Abyssal (talk) 14:21, 22 October 2012 (UTC)
  • I'm a bit concerned that some closeness to source structure still remains, for example to this source. I'm also seeing a couple of factual errors: for example, you say that Pamplona was almost a pentagon, but your source says it was almost a hexagon. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:33, 24 October 2012 (UTC)
  • I made some copyedits to clarify the wording in the section on Gibraltar, but did not change the structure, which seems fairly natural - basically chronological. What is the concern here? I fixed the Pamplona polygon problem. What is the other factual error? Aymatth2 (talk) 14:32, 24 October 2012 (UTC)
  • The bit about "Philip II's chief engineer Tibúrcio Spannocchi refused to stop work on the zigzag wall" - the source says he refused to allow it to be destroyed, and that it was later completed, but doesn't connect the two in that way. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:04, 28 October 2012 (UTC)
  • I have tweaked the wording. Think it is fixed now. Aymatth2 (talk) 11:53, 28 October 2012 (UTC)
  • Okay, that's probably good enough, then. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:03, 3 November 2012 (UTC)