Template:Did you know nominations/Giorgio de Stefani

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 15:26, 13 October 2012 (UTC)

Giorgio de Stefani

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5x expanded by Lajbi (talk). Self nom at 15:58, 5 October 2012 (UTC)

  • The article, a five-fold expansion, is new enough and long enough. Neither of the proposed hooks is properly referenced. The article has several tags which it would be good to sort out before this appears in DYK. What about using:
  • What's wrong with this reference for the original first hook? It covers everything that is stated in the sentence. Lajbi Holla @ meCP 16:03, 12 October 2012 (UTC)
Well, I don't see that reference (in Italian) in the part of the article that refers to his ambidexterity. But your reference 44 does largely cover the hook facts. However the original reference is also unsatisfactory because it is ungrammatical. Here is another suggestion:
  • However you consider it better it's fine for me. Lajbi Holla @ meCP 10:35, 13 October 2012 (UTC)