Template:Did you know nominations/Galit Hasan-Rokem

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 16:24, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

Galit Hasan-Rokem edit

Galit Hasan-Rokem
Galit Hasan-Rokem

5x expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self-nominated at 21:46, 10 October 2015 (UTC).

  • Article length and date of posting are in order. Hook is cited and verified. Text is neutral and no copy vio noted. QPQ done. Img is freely licensed. Good to go. Nvvchar (talk) 02:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)‎
  • The hook seems to be diametrically opposed to the article: the hook says "bias toward" which indicates to me that it's favoring the Arabic-speaking residents, while the article says "bias against", which indicates to me that it's favoring the Hebrew-speaking residents at the expense of the Arabic-speaking ones, and this latter is what's stated in the source's lede. Please revise the hook to reflect the article and its sources. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:24, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
  • Sorry about that. I fixed the hook. Yoninah (talk) 16:30, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
  • Restoring tick; hook now reflects article and source. Rest of review per Nvvchar. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:13, 15 October 2015 (UTC)