Template:Did you know nominations/Frank Sinatra Enterprises

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The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 03:57, 9 December 2015 (UTC)

Frank Sinatra Enterprises

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5x expanded by Miyagawa (talk). Self-nominated at 12:37, 7 November 2015 (UTC).

  • 5x expansion verified (you did it with 10 characters to spare!). New enough, long enough, well referenced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. However, the hooks are rather dry. Since you'd like this to run in the December 12 centenary set, why not describe some of the events of "Sinatra 100"? There are a number of events mentioned in the source that you could also add to the article. Yoninah (talk) 20:53, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
  • OK...but don't you think it would be more hooky if you mentioned a few of the events? Yoninah (talk) 20:58, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
  • I had concerns that mentioning the Sinatra exhibition might come off as advertising seeing as it's touring through February. Miyagawa (talk) 22:07, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
  • OK, you're right as usual :) ALT3 hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT3 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 22:10, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
  • Just in case the promoter prefers something else, ALT0, ALT1 and ALT2 are also verified and cited inline. Yoninah (talk) 22:15, 8 November 2015 (UTC)