Template:Did you know nominations/Founders Tower (Oklahoma City)
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:52, 4 September 2013 (UTC)
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Founders Tower (Oklahoma City) edit
- ... that Founders Tower (pictured) in Oklahoma City was the first building after the Seattle Space Needle to have a revolving restaurant in the United States?
- Reviewed: Cowan Creek Circular Enclosure
5x expanded by Niagara (talk). Self nominated at 18:37, 21 August 2013 (UTC).
- Expansion verified. Date verified. Organization and sourcing look good. I'm not a fan of the hook's phrasing. How about this:
- ALT1: ... that Founders Tower (pictured) in Oklahoma City was the second building in the United States to have a revolving restaurant?
- --Cryptic C62 · Talk 00:14, 22 August 2013 (UTC)
ALT1 hook needs reviewing by a new reviewer. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:36, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
- The article says " the design of Founders Tower was the ....". Now, was it the second one designed or second one to have a revolving restaurant? (There was 2 year gap between the design and the completion). Can we change the hook or the article so that they make the same claim? Victuallers (talk) 21:23, 31 August 2013 (UTC)
- Added a citation that specifically mentions the building being the second to have a revolving restaurant. Niagara Don't give up the ship 02:43, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for your patience in finding the extra ref. Expansion fine, image, age, copyvio - nice article. Thanks Victuallers (talk) 09:20, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
- Note: moving Victuallers' tick to the start of his comment, where it will be seen, and using subst in the tick template per DYK edit page. BlueMoonset (talk) 13:11, 1 September 2013 (UTC)
