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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 12:55, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

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Created by Vivvt (talk). Self-nominated at 19:46, 15 April 2017 (UTC).

  • The article is new and long enough and is within policy (neutral, well cited, free of plagiarism/copyright violations based on numerous spot checks). The hook is short enough. No citation is given here, but in the article, Bartrop 2016 is used.Bartrop, Paul R. (2016). Resisting the Holocaust: Upstanders, Partisans, and Survivors: Upstanders, Partisans, and Survivors. ABC-CLIO. pp. 36–38. ISBN 978-1-61069-879-5. Retrieved 27 February 2017. The image is GFDL cc-by-3.0 and is used in the article. While not an expert on images, I find the image isn't great, mostly because it is a bit busy (showing a lot of non-related people, the bridge, etc). I'm not sure if this could be posted to DYK by April 23 or 24, but agree that it would be nice. Smmurphy(Talk) 16:51, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
  • The article is tagged as an unreviewed article and, in fact, is full of grammatical errors. It is not ready for promotion in this state and needs a copyedit for English grammar. The hook also needs to be polished. Do you mean:
  • ALT1: ... that during World War II, the Fatebenefratelli Hospital (pictured) treated Jews diagnosed with a fictitious fatal disease known as "Syndrome K" to protect them from the Nazis? Yoninah (talk) 20:07, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: I am okay with ALT1. Reviewer, an anon IP, and myself have done some copy edits. See if the article needs further improvements. @Smmurphy: Can you remove the Userspace draft tag as you have reviewed the article? - Vivvt (Talk) 12:33, 18 April 2017 (UTC)
  • I've removed the tags. The ce tag was added while I was copy-editing and I'm uncertain with my own grammar and am happy to have a second copy editor recheck. Smmurphy(Talk) 13:09, 18 April 2017 (UTC)
  • I've gone ahead and given the page a thorough copyedit for English grammar, as well as corrected information mis-cited from the sources. Here is an updated hook:
  • ALT2: ... that during the Holocaust in Italy, doctors at Fatebenefratelli Hospital (pictured) protected Jews from the Nazis by diagnosing them with a fictitious disease called "Syndrome K"?
  • I also added an infobox. As an article about a hospital, it seems to me that information should be provided as to number of beds, medical specialties, etc. Yoninah (talk) 17:23, 18 April 2017 (UTC)
  • Better image posted here and in article. Yoninah (talk) 17:37, 18 April 2017 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: I have added some more information about the hospital departments, services, and surgeries performed. - Vivvt (Talk) 18:26, 18 April 2017 (UTC)
  • @Vivvt: Thank you. If you have some numbers to put into the infobox (e.g. number of beds) that would also be good. But the article looks good and ALT2 is ready for a re-review. Yoninah (talk) 21:29, 18 April 2017 (UTC)
  • Approving ALT2 as a suitable hook and otherwise relying on Smmurphy's review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:15, 19 April 2017 (UTC)
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