Template:Did you know nominations/Euretaster insignis

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:20, 20 April 2019 (UTC)

Euretaster insignis edit

(

)

Striking sea star

~~... that the female striking sea star broods her young and even provides nourishment for them?~~ Source: "These unusual asteroids brood their young in a specialised supradorsal cavity." and "Incredibly, these young are fed by the parent, though in a rather indirect and involuntary manner that has been referred to as “cannibalistic ectoparasitism”. The developing larvae are able to irritate the epidermal tissue, which in turn stimulates the production of a nutrient-rich mucosal secretion that nourishes the young."
- ALT1:~~... that the young of the striking sea star have been described as “cannibalistic ectoparasites" of their mother?~~

Reviewed: Billy Jamieson

Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 07:24, 18 March 2019 (UTC).

@Cwmhiraeth: New enough, long enough, within policy (no copyvios or close paraphrasing detected). Hooks short enough, interesting enough, and supported by a source. QPQ done. But I have one small concern, I would like the lead to be expanded a bit, there are just a couple of lines now, which I feel is too short for an article of that length. KCVelaga (talk) 07:50, 18 March 2019 (UTC)

@KCVelaga: Thank you for the review. I have expanded the lead section, and have also added an image to the proposed hook. Could you review that too, please. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:37, 18 March 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for working on the lead, image OK. GTG, ALT0 is interesting than ALT1, I prefer ALT0. KCVelaga (talk) 09:42, 18 March 2019 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this. I don't see what's hooky about ALT0. I wanted to promote ALT1, but the descriptive term is not about them, but about the way they receive their nourishment. Could this be reworded, like:
ALT1a: ... that the young of the striking sea star are nourished in a manner described as "cannibalistic ectoparasitism"? Yoninah (talk) 19:54, 20 April 2019 (UTC)

I am happy with ALT1a. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:01, 20 April 2019 (UTC)

Thank you. Restoring tick per KCVelaga's review. Yoninah (talk) 21:18, 20 April 2019 (UTC)