Template:Did you know nominations/Donald L. Cunningham
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:43, 6 March 2017 (UTC)
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Donald L. Cunningham edit
- ... that Donald L. Cunningham, one of the original Justices of the Supreme Court of Arizona, once lost everything in a fire except for a single office chair?
- ALT1:... that ...? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
Created by ErieSwiftByrd (talk). Self-nominated at 22:30, 26 February 2017 (UTC).
Every paragraph (except for the intro) has to be cited. The hook is not cited by a source. Please cite "Early life and education" and "Career" sections. Also, please make sure the information on the intro is cited elsewhere in the article per WP:LEAD. The information in the intro is standing alone without a single mention elsewhere. Same thing goes for the infobox (it states he is a Democrat but that isn't cited in the body paragraphs). Please fix this and let me know so I can take a second look. ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 01:19, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
- ComputerJA I made the edits, how does it look now?ErieSwiftByrd (talk) 05:10, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
- @User:ErieSwiftByrd: Much better. Source #2 doesn't seem to back up what it attributes. I saw no mention of Cunningham and some other stuff (there are two pages, so make sure the source format reflects that – let me know if you need help). There is also no mention of Ross and McAlister in the body paragraphs per WP:INFOBOXREF. Should be good after that! ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 13:54, 27 February 2017 (UTC)
- @ComputerJA I altered source 2 too make it more specific, and cited to page 2 and mentioned Ross and McAlister in the body paragraphs. I also made some minor corrections. ErieSwiftByrd (talk) 04:32, 28 February 2017 (UTC)
Everything checks out! Article is in good shape, it was expanded 5x in the required time, and sources check out. I think there is no need for QPQ since it seem's this is User:ErieSwiftByrd's second nomination. ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 13:49, 28 February 2017 (UTC)
