- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by MPJ-DK 01:34, 3 September 2016 (UTC)
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Don Ingalls edit
- ... that Don Ingalls first met Gene Roddenberry when they worked at the Los Angeles Police Department, and went on to be credited with writing two episodes of Star Trek?
- ALT1:... that Don Ingalls first met Gene Roddenberry when they worked at the LAPD, and went on to be credited with writing two episodes of Star Trek?
- Reviewed: Triathlon at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Men's
- Comment: For the Star Trek 50th anniversary on September 8.
Created by Miyagawa (talk). Self-nominated at 11:43, 16 July 2016 (UTC).
Hook (and all of article) is cited to two offline sources which I will assume state the facts. Article is well cited, neutral in tone and I will assume doesn't paraphrase the sources. The hook is cited, short enough and interesting. I would prefer the first one as I don't know how widespread recognition of the LAPD acronym is. No images in article and QPQ has been completed. Nice work - Dumelow (talk) 07:15, 17 July 2016 (UTC)
