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The result was: promoted by 4meter4 (talk) 21:38, 2015 November 20 (UTC)

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108 memorial chortens at Docula Pass
108 memorial chortens at Docula Pass

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 11:46, 20 October 2015 (UTC).

  • These two articles are new enough and long enough. The image is properly licensed, the articles are neutral and I detected no copyright issues. I find the use of the word "backdrop" in the hook and "back ground" in one of the articles unsatisfactory, - "The pass with 108 memorial chortens is in the back ground of the first Royal Botanical Park in the country." What is the precise relationship between the park and the pass? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:38, 13 November 2015 (UTC)
  • Cwmhiraeth Thanks for the review. Yes, the 108 chortens are part the park. Pl see this ref Introducing Thimphu to the Dochu La of Lonely Planet. Accordingly I have made small change in the original hook itself and also in the articles. Nvvchar. 04:32, 14 November 2015 (UTC)
  • That matter has been clarified and article and hook tweaked so this nomination is good to go. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:22, 14 November 2015 (UTC)
Nvvchar I've reworded the hook just a bit so that it flows better. Can you please confirm that the ALT below is correct (i.e. it means the same thing as the original)? If so, I'll push that version to the prep area instead (it shouldn't need a new review for the changes I made).
ALT1: ... that the Dochula Pass, which contains 108 memorial chortens (pictured), is within the first Royal Botanical Park in Bhutan? The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 04:26, 15 November 2015 (UTC)
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