Template:Did you know nominations/Do Not Ask What Good We Do

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:21, 22 September 2012 (UTC)

Do Not Ask What Good We Do edit

  • Reviewed: Sat Bains
  • Comment: Woo, nominated with minutes to spare. By the way, if anyone has any alternative hook proposals, feel free to suggest them.

Created/expanded by Silver seren (talk). Self nom at 23:03, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

  • Cheers. All words in quotation marks need to be quoted exactly. Above, it's "putting the brakes" while in the article it is "put the brakes..." but most importantly, there's no inline citation for that statement in your article, and neither of the two references at the end of that paragraph contain that quote.[1] [2] Article size and date are OK. Poeticbent talk 17:34, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
Sorry about that. I've put the citation on the exact sentence and i've changed the hook to be an exact quote. Better now? SilverserenC 18:14, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
The new-added citation confirmed. Everything seems to be OK now. Poeticbent talk 20:06, 21 September 2012 (UTC)