- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Gatoclass (talk) 15:32, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
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Cloud Man edit
... that Cloud Man and his entire hunting party survived almost three days buried during a snowstorm with just blankets and dried buffalo meat?
- Reviewed: Eleonore Büning
Created by Bobamnertiopsis (talk). Self-nominated at 22:49, 27 August 2016 (UTC).
No issues found with article, ready for human review.- ✓ This article is new and was created on 22:20, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
- ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 5042 characters
- ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
- ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
- ✓ A copyright violation is unlikely according to automated metrics (0.0% confidence; confirm)
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Some overall issues detected- ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 131 characters
- ✗ Bobamnertiopsis has more than 5 DYK credits. A QPQ review is required for this nomination.
- Comment. You can't be "buried in a snowstorm". Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:05, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- Don't say that, Cwmhiraeth! You can do anything you set your mind to! (Changed to "during"; hopefully the implication that he was buried in snow during a snowstorm is clear enough.) BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 08:19, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, that's better! If you do your QPQ review, I'll review this nomination. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:22, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Cwmhiraeth: I've started a review. Thanks! BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 08:51, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1 ...
that Cloud Man and his entire hunting party survived being buried in snowdrifts for almost three days?
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are sourced and accepted in good faith, the article is neutral and I was unable to check for policy issues because the sources were not accessible to me. I guess Cloud Man was a resourceful man and used to such hardships as being buried in snowdrifts. I have added ALT1, which I think has more impact. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:39, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
The claim in the hook is from the subject's own account and not independently verified, so it shouldn't be presented as an established fact. Gatoclass (talk) 09:45, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- Good call. ALT2 ...
that Cloud Man and his entire hunting party reportedly survived being buried in snowdrifts for almost three days?
- Good call. ALT2 ...
ALT3 ... that Cloud Man told missionary Samuel Pond that he and his entire hunting party had survived being buried in snowdrifts for almost three days? @Cwmhiraeth:, @Gatoclass: BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 16:36, 29 August 2016 (UTC)
- I would approve ALT3. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:14, 29 August 2016 (UTC)