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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 20:41, 25 October 2011 (UTC)

Church of St Peter, Berende edit

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Fresco of the Dormition of the Mother of God painted above the entrance of the church

Created/expanded by TodorBozhinov (talk). Self nom at 13:18, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

I made some spelling corrections to this article and changed the wording of the last sentence of the lead to give it more punch. Looks good to go. For a hook, I suggest "...that a Bulgarian tsar was painted on what was wrongly thought to be a cemetery church" Whiteghost.ink 07:52, 19 October 2011 (UTC)
Hi, thanks for the approval and the fixes! I like your hook, but to make it factually accurate, we have to consider that both of these are just theories. It would have to be rephrased to something along the lines of "...that a Bulgarian tsar may have been painted on what was possibly wrongly thought to be a cemetery church"... which looks kind of ugly :S — Toдor Boжinov — 12:26, 20 October 2011 (UTC)
  • Hook: Rather long. Referenced fairly well, except for the Westernmost bit. How about ALT1 ... that the medieval Church of St Peter, featuring "particularly remarkable" frescoes (pictured), once had an inscription by a Bulgarian tsar on its exterior?
Article: long enough, new enough. Referenced fully. AGF on Bulgarian sources.
Summary: Waiting for feedback on the hook. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:43, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
Hi and thanks for the review! Sure, the hook is fine. — Toдor Boжinov — 07:23, 25 October 2011 (UTC)
  • ALT1 good to go! AGF on offline and foreign sources. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:29, 25 October 2011 (UTC)


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