Template:Did you know nominations/Charles MacTavish

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 17:26, 11 March 2020 (UTC)

Charles MacTavish

5x expanded by Andrew Gray (talk). Self-nominated at 18:35, 19 February 2020 (UTC).

  • This article is a five-fold expansion and is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are cited inline and either could be used, although I prefer ALT1. The article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:17, 4 March 2020 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote ALT1 per Cwmhiraeth's review, but the article doesn't mention the British House of Commons. Yoninah (talk) 22:56, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: Ah - terminology issue. We tend to just say "member of / stood for / elected to Parliament" rather than specifying "in the House of Commons", so the article didn't use that exact phrase. I've tweaked so it actually specifies the Commons in one place, though you could also say "...was briefly a member of the British parliament?" in the hook if you'd prefer, since that's the terminology the article mostly uses. Happy either way. Andrew Gray (talk) 23:15, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
  • Thank you. I think the part about trying for "an Irish seat" was what was confusing me. Restoring tick for ALT1 per new article wording. Yoninah (talk) 17:24, 11 March 2020 (UTC)