Template:Did you know nominations/Charenton

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 23:12, 23 March 2017 (UTC)
Closing this page since it was also nominated about 16 hours prior to this, and that review has progressed further. See Template:Did you know nominations/Charenton (asylum) for the surviving nomination page.

Charenton

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  • ... that director François Simonnet de Coulmier had patients of Charenton asylum organize and act in plays as a form of psychotherapy? Source: De Saussure, Raymond. “Journal of the History of Medicine and Allied Sciences.” Journal of the History of Medicine and Allied Sciences, vol. 3, no. 3, 1948, pp. 452–452.

5x expanded by Mguo17 (talk). Self-nominated at 17:42, 12 March 2017 (UTC).

  • This article was nominated 9 days after it was expanded, and was only expanded a little more than 3x. Unfortunate since the hook was quite intriguing. Inline citations are used throughout, including for the hook, but I can't verify the hook citation since I can't access the book, but I could assume good faith if it weren't for the problem with the article's length. No copyvio issues from what I can tell. Ry's the Guy (talk|contribs) 10:42, 16 March 2017 (UTC)
  • Comment: the article was 1241 prose characters prior to expansion, which requires a 5x expansion to 6205 prose characters; it is currently 4427, so another 1778 prose characters will be needed. As well, the "updated" template on the article needs to be satisfied. Mguo17, if you can add those 1778 prose characters to satisfy the expansion requirement, please let us know here. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:08, 16 March 2017 (UTC)
  • Closing comment: it turns out that there was an earlier nomination of this article, where the review has progressed further and found additional issues beyond the insufficient expansion. I'm closing this in favor of the other nomination, Template:Did you know nominations/Charenton (asylum), and copied the hook and my previous comment there to consolidate things. I didn't think copying Rystheguy's initial comments added anything new, which is the only reason I didn't copy them as well. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:12, 23 March 2017 (UTC)