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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 19:10, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
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Cart Life edit
- ... that video game Cart Life, winner of three Independent Games Festival awards including the grand prize in 2013, is Richard Hofmeier's first game?
- Comment: Had some trouble wording this, if you can think of a better way then feel free to suggest it.
Created by Samwalton9 (talk). Self nominated at 19:22, 31 December 2013 (UTC).
Article looks good, well-sourced, long enough, interesting hook. Perhaps a minor tweak to the hook: "...grand prize in 2013, is the first game that Richard Hofmeier developed?"--CaroleHenson (talk) 17:52, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
- Happy with that, thanks. Samwalton9 (talk) 18:16, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
