Template:Did you know nominations/CC Barber

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The result was: promoted by sst^flyer 09:28, 23 September 2015 (UTC)

CC Barber edit

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... that Miss Oregon 2009 CC Barber was raised by her grandmother?

ALT1:... ~~that Miss Oregon 2009 CC Barber was raised by her grandmother since she was five months old~~?
ALT2:... that Miss Oregon 2009 CC Barber was raised by her grandmother from the time she was five months old?
Reviewed: WBCM-LP

Created by Dravecky (talk). Self-nominated at 09:38, 29 August 2015 (UTC).

I'd suggest changing the ALT1 hook to either 'has been raised...since' or 'was raised...from the time' as smoother language. 'was raised...since' just feels awkward. valereee (talk) 13:08, 30 August 2015 (UTC)

You're completely right. She's a grown woman and on her own now so I didn't want to put the raising in the present tense then floundered when looking for a simple way to phrase this. Thanks for your elegant solution. - Dravecky (talk) 11:10, 1 September 2015 (UTC)

Blushing. valereee (talk) 12:59, 1 September 2015 (UTC)

Full review needed now that hooks are set. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:10, 17 September 2015 (UTC)
New enough, long enough, referenced, hook cited and verified. Thanks! Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 23:49, 22 September 2015 (UTC)