Template:Did you know nominations/Bomb Pop

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:55, 2 September 2011 (UTC)

Bomb Pop

edit

5x expanded by Joe Chill (talk). Self nom at 17:12, 27 August 2011 (UTC)

  • I am the expander and nominator. I messed up the nomination somehow. Joe Chill (talk) 18:05, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
  • Fixed it. I think "Nominator" "Author" has to be changed to your name in the template field. Froggerlaura (talk) 18:26, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
  • Had a read through, and my issue is that the Duff Goldman line doesn't actually say they're going to be Bomb Pops. In fact, the only mention in the article of Bomb Pops is that they were Duff's favorite Blue Bunny line as a child. As such, it's probably better to have that information on the Wells' Dairy, which ruins your hook and because the article is only just over 1500 characters, will reduce it below the minimum size for DYK. Miyagawa (talk) 19:41, 29 August 2011 (UTC)
    • I totally misread the source, but I did find two interesting facts and expanded it after removing those sentence.
  • Good job on saving the nomination. Article now meets the criteria, and I think that the national day hook is the best out of the new three. Miyagawa (talk) 20:55, 29 August 2011 (UTC)